as much as it does look cool, there isn't really a point to it. even abstract art gives you something to think about, but this (like i said) just looks cool without a meaning or story.
rating given for effort more so than the product.
as much as it does look cool, there isn't really a point to it. even abstract art gives you something to think about, but this (like i said) just looks cool without a meaning or story.
rating given for effort more so than the product.
I thought the name would be descriptive enough. It was designed to represent a feeling more than a story. A feeling of heat and energy. Story is a matter of perspective and experience where emotion or intuition are something we all share on a more personal level. This piece is a creation of intuition. I could even be so clever as to say that the flare or "spark" as described by the title is in fact the blossoming of an idea and your staring right into the "eye" of it. There is my perspective or "story." Take another look and don't analyze it, feel it. Your thoughts are much appreciated. Thank you for the review.
the lens flare is pretty, but it seems like you don't know much about perspectives or human anatomy. the head is seriously messed up. i know you are doing this one to work on lighting, but just some of the stuff like the curtain pole just hanging there, muffled colors, poor anatomy (even for manga), and awkward perspectives make this kind of average.
(you did the lighting fairly well however)
actualy in a medicine estudent and studying human anatomy but In this piece I only pay atention to the lightning interaction with diferent tipes of objects thats way is a lightning practice . but good observation :)
and yeah i kinda mess up with the face .
cool and all, i don't understand why her left arm is up. it just doesn't make sense unless there was glass in-between, and she was leaning on it. or maybe she broke out in interpretive dance at the sight of the heads? who knows, either way, its fun to look at. good job.
I was trying to make it that she stepped back in shock, since she didnt see the faces till she raised the light. I guess it didnt work
this has amazing detail, the neon blue and the foggy background really help the picture. the smooth shading really helps the feel as well as the light to dark contrast.
basically, it looks cool, and i like it. props
Thanks! Getting a little crazy when it comes to details^^;;
its not a bad picture by any means, its just that the chasm looks completely wrong.
ok. I made some modifications. Thanks
it seems a little rushed, but its still not bad.
Thank you :3
KKS
wow the detail put into this is incredible. bravo
Danke!
I took a really long break from uploading on this site because I was really bad. Now, I'm better, and I want to share my work. Please, if you feel that I can improve something, tell me.
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