slinkie7's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Eye of the Flare]

as much as it does look cool, there isn't really a point to it. even abstract art gives you something to think about, but this (like i said) just looks cool without a meaning or story.
rating given for effort more so than the product.

penguin100 responds:

I thought the name would be descriptive enough. It was designed to represent a feeling more than a story. A feeling of heat and energy. Story is a matter of perspective and experience where emotion or intuition are something we all share on a more personal level. This piece is a creation of intuition. I could even be so clever as to say that the flare or "spark" as described by the title is in fact the blossoming of an idea and your staring right into the "eye" of it. There is my perspective or "story." Take another look and don't analyze it, feel it. Your thoughts are much appreciated. Thank you for the review.

[knock or die]

the lens flare is pretty, but it seems like you don't know much about perspectives or human anatomy. the head is seriously messed up. i know you are doing this one to work on lighting, but just some of the stuff like the curtain pole just hanging there, muffled colors, poor anatomy (even for manga), and awkward perspectives make this kind of average.
(you did the lighting fairly well however)

immaboreddude responds:

actualy in a medicine estudent and studying human anatomy but In this piece I only pay atention to the lightning interaction with diferent tipes of objects thats way is a lightning practice . but good observation :)

and yeah i kinda mess up with the face .

[FaceWall]

cool and all, i don't understand why her left arm is up. it just doesn't make sense unless there was glass in-between, and she was leaning on it. or maybe she broke out in interpretive dance at the sight of the heads? who knows, either way, its fun to look at. good job.

MindChamber responds:

I was trying to make it that she stepped back in shock, since she didnt see the faces till she raised the light. I guess it didnt work

[Heisenberg]

its definitely hizenburg, but its still a little rough beyond artistic style. some other things like typos in the tags... just make it feel like you don't care. i hope you understand what I'm saying.

Gaz-Metal responds:

I think you'll find it is - Heisenberg, although I did write "Walk," instead of "Walt" in the tags. Oops. I do understand what you mean. I'm self taught in this painting and art lark, I just make it up as I go along and learn my own techniques, hence the roughness. I like it better that way. As for the spelling mistake, that was just a simple mistake. Looking at your spelling and grammar, I don't know how you have the gall to pull my spelling.

[Just Like His Mother]

GREAT PICTURE!!!!!!!!! i had to get that out of the way, but i think the gun is a tiny bit too hard to see/ identify. again, amazing detail and overall picture

ZachsAnomaly responds:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it, and I apologize about overblurring the gun.

[me and my girlfriend]

i can tell you put effort into this, but it just didnt come out right. i can tell you are probably somewhat of a beginner, but hell i am too. my main problem are just the simple things, like abnormally large upper teeth, the lines on your shirt, the disproportional neck, and some "crunchy" lines. its not terrible or anything, but you need some work.

chiro94 responds:

I kinda tried to make them cartoonie by enlarging some features, you know as those bubble head drawings you see in some places, I guess I didn´t do it that well because it looks more like I really tried to do it as realistic as possible. anyway thanks for the comment ill upload another portrait I did so you can see the difference.

[Atlas]

this has amazing detail, the neon blue and the foggy background really help the picture. the smooth shading really helps the feel as well as the light to dark contrast.

basically, it looks cool, and i like it. props

navka responds:

Thanks! Getting a little crazy when it comes to details^^;;

[Defense Robot in Action]

its not a bad picture by any means, its just that the chasm looks completely wrong.

oladitan responds:

ok. I made some modifications. Thanks

[KKS - Reiko]

it seems a little rushed, but its still not bad.

KKSlider60 responds:

Thank you :3
KKS

[The Hunter]

wow the detail put into this is incredible. bravo

LittleLuckyLink responds:

Danke!